I liked the eye shape in the last drawing, but didn't get it right so I tried again. I tried to map it out with a brush pen, which is what that scrawl at the bottom of the page is.

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This time I used my "straight to ink" method, without the pencil guides. I like it better, but I am prone to errors. Note the ear on the opposite side of the head is in front of the mane.
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I tried to fix it, but these are just sketches. They don't "fix" well. I also noticed the bridle doesn't cross the bridge of the horse's face. I fixed that too, but didn't take a picture.